Initial Progress On Assignment #5
For this assignment, I have lots of ideas. I have played around with all kinds of ideas on this one and just haven't found one I'm completely happy with.
This is just too hard to read and not quite eye-catching enough for my taste. I like certain things about it, but it's going to take quite a bit more time before I feel good about the direction I'm headed on this. So I guess we'll see what happens with it! I'm still very hopeful about this logo redesign, it's just gonna take a little extra thought!
I actually quite like it, but I think one small change will help. Instead of having the text color gradient with red in the middle and black toward the outer portions, reverse that. Make it black in the middle and red toward the outsides. That could make the text stand out better from the black tree branches at left and right. Also, maybe try moving the text down a little bit and reduce the amount of space between lines.
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